All Comments on 'Emotional Magic Ch. 01'

I know these Are obviously fantasy but we have to stop with the twelve inch cocks and f cups. 5'2" with enormous gross tits

What an amazing start of a wonderful story please continue.

I thought it was pretty good. Not perfect, but a great first story. Keep writing. F-cups are a little cliche, but at least you didn’t go for K.

It will be interesting to see you describe the nature of the magic. I’m used to more physical magic, so please consider trying to describe the nature and boundaries of the magic.

Definitely continue - 4.7 stars, so I rounded to 5.

Thanks for sharing.

I look forward to the next installment.

Yeah, it was his comment, not yours. You couldn't just post your opinion without bitching about someone who has a different opinion?

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Also, I assume this was regarding the "Lost at "f" cup" comment, but since you don't seem to be aware of the concept of copy & paste, that's just an assumption.

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Lastly, "4.7 stars, so I rounded to 5. " So, if the next chapter is better, where else is there to go? 6? I've never understood the concept of giving passable stories a 5. That should be a superlative and rarely given. By definition, most stories are average, a 3.

Strange and fascinating story -- different from most material here, mostly in a good way.

In general very well told, lots of emotional depth and character description, except that for me it was a little too much shouting in extacy in the last part.

I thought you did an excellent job for a first submission, I didn't think anything was to bad at all. As mentioned it is YOUR story write what you want to, I am looking forward to the next part.

Looking forward for the next part!!!!

Interesting and exciting story. Capture the angst of handicapped young man with a creative twist. Keep writing but don't get too far out.

Now that you got the start of your story. Lets see how things develop.

That was a very good first submission. honestly felt like a good writer, wanting to have some real talk about the struggles of life. The sex in the dream was a bit odd, but in the way dreams are, kinda disjointed, never traveling always being where you want to be

So where's the rest?