All Comments on 'Enchainment'

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jleetechiejleetechieover 11 years ago
a slight change and ...

if this was of a more nc nature, with just a slight change of the plot, it would be explosive!

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 11 years ago
A good story.

It is often difficult to find the exact niche for a story, however good it is or however well-written. To be honest, I think this is probably more NC than BDSM but, whichever category you put it in, it is still a good story. I would have preferred it without the 'pill', but it is your story after all.

Thank you for sharing it with us; I hope you will write much more and share that with us, too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Oh goodie! Another abusive, violent asshole.

What a pile of garbage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
It's a a story!

And one in which a certain scene is played out.

He isn't abusive because he stops when she gives her safe word (signal since she's gsgged)

She is obviously okay with what happened up to that point or she would have pled out earlier.

And I don't get where you get asshole either considering the aftercare scene presented. Don't read M/s stories if you don't like the relationship dynamic.

To the author I found it well written and entertaining. Congrats!

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