All Comments on 'Enchanted Ch. 09'

I have been reading this story and have been impressed. I like the characters and the story line. I like the way John gets into situations and finds away to get some pussy. 5 stars for your efforts. I look forward to more reading and thanks for your time and imagination.

I don't like the interaction with Beytrixxa. Feels like trash to me.

I love the interaction with Beytrixxa. She is strong and mysterious, she plays with John as if he is just a toy. Thanks

Really enjoying the story, would you like DMs about errors spotted? Or are these early drafts. I have no clue how easy / hard it is to edit one's work on Literotica. I saw in your bio that you have published work elsewhere so maybe those were gone over by an editor.