All Comments on 'Enchanted Ch. 10'

Found this storyline by Accident! Hoping for More !

I'm loving this story. I like the characters and the banter between them. I like the story line and character development. Please continue and thanks for your time and imagination.

Intriguing and fun. I like how it's developing.

One correction, though: Sails, not sales.

Good story but like many authors you need an editor. Things like sail/sale and pointless ‘clever’ banter can disrupt a reader’s interest

'the ladder' in this phrase is a rope effing ladder. How in the name of Beytrixxa does someone with a frigging peg leg climb a rope ladder, up or down? LOL

THIS you gotta explain. (in a later chapter, plz, so I don't need to keep coming back to look for an answer, 'cause I'll forget, as well.)

Pretty good story teller, you are, but go back to the comments after Ch 2(?), mebbe 3, and read/re-read what I wrote, and apply it, again. I had to read sentence in this chapter 3-4, mebbe 5 times before I could figure out what the eff the word was supposed to be, instead of the word you wrote.

Teller of story, are you. Smith of words; as much, not. (just watched Last Jedi, the other night, Yoda had a cameo; resist, I couldn't.) LOL

GeoD

Dead men tell no tales.

Another chapter

Oh man! "Is it a moon?" I laughed hard at that. ;-D