All Comments on 'Enchanted Twelve 1'

Sometimes a heart felt story comes along in this work aday world and one must take take time and thank the author,

thanks R.H & F. all I can say is "Wow!". dan.

entries. Keep up the good work, Red.

for us to build upon. It's a prime example of your usual fine work Red. Thanks for thinking this one up. This is gonna be fun.

From the git-go this story quickly grabs your attention and holds it throughout. A magical story from a very talented Writer who only gets better with every new story she attempts. Red, you are a Wonder! Beautifully written and really fun to read.

You succeeded in kicking this chain story off to a great start. Congrats!

Very nice start and an interesting concept. Well Done! I like it and have read some of the others, this is fun. Thanks for an enjoyable tale.

Love how you took the simple concept of the fairy tale, one of my all time favorites to boot, and fleshed it out into a full story of mystery and magic. I'm enjoying it trememdously.