All Comments on 'Encounter at the Beach'

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H.H.MorantH.H.Morantalmost 15 years ago
Disappointing

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<p class=MsoNormal><i>My husband was taking care of the kids so I could have

some "me" time, and I was going to the local nude beach. I hadn't

been there for a while, so I was looking forward to the day. I felt good about

my body, even now in my 40's. I'd even become comfortable with the fact that I

enjoyed showing off my lean stomach and small but firm breasts. I also liked

watching the men at the beach.<o:p></o:p></i></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal>The narrator likes to go to the beach to soak of the sun,

show off her body, and gawk at well built men.<span style="mso-spacerun:

yes">  </span>Nothing wrong with that.<o:p></o:p></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal>Then she slides into an act of adultery without out the

sightest of second thoughts, regrets – anything.<span

style="mso-spacerun: yes">  </span>She doesn say <I>I’ve never done

this before</I> either to the guy or herself – strange, unless she

has made a practice of it, in which case you’d have guessed she had sex of the

zipless fuck variety when she went to the beach that day.<o:p></o:p></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal>In short, while the story has all the moves necessary for a

good stroke story the characters, particularly the narrator, are robots –

no motivation, just programmed to take certain actions.<o:p></o:p></p>

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very Dissapointing

The husband should have been there then kicked the crap out of the guy with her then he should tell her after he takes the pictures to not to come home .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
dissapointed but for different reasons

why read it morant when it told you in the title she as going to be cheating im getting sick of your type giving writers a hard time if you dont like the subject dont bother reading the storys,my problem with it was with the the way the hooked up it was to quick wouldve liked a longer seduction even on a nudist beach

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
My wife.

My "X" wife said she wanted some 'me' time once and I said okay and when she came home about 10:00am her bags were on the front steps and I told her she now had all the me time she wanted (then I got pictures of her me time and the Judge allowed her a $1.00 and I got the rest).! By the way - she is on drugs and 151 proof now and in the gutter. Always looks better on the other side till you get there. JAG/TSO

imharmless69imharmless69almost 15 years ago
Not at all disappointed

I enjoyed this story very much. It's fantasy, people, and very well done at that.

HoosierFriendHoosierFriendalmost 15 years ago
nicely done

This was a nice story, told well. I am always amazed (amused?) when readers pass judgment on fictional characters. Someone did something naughty in a Literotica story? Oh my! Off with her head!

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