All Comments on 'End of Innocence Ch. 00 - Prologue'

It is a good start but needs more details about what has happened and is happening at the current time.

Looking forward to reading your next chapter

for your first publication I enjoyed the read and can only hope that the rest of the story is as intriguing as this bit you tease us with. Please keep going

Thank you to my readers and their comments. All the chapters (17) and the prologue have been completed. Outside of the prologue, the 17 chapters are all in the pending state and awaiting release by Literotica. I assume that the site only releases the chapters one at a time but none of you will have to wait too long for the entire story.

You will find this is not a typical brother-sister story - I think you will enjoy it. I spent a great deal of time researching the story, facts, and developing the plot. I started this endeavor 7 years ago, wrote the baseline, then my personal life took over. Finally, I had the time to finish it at a level where I could say, yeah, I have something here.

Of course, as soon as I sent the story in, I found the typical typos that drive writers nuts but I will edit them out in time.

Again, thank you to all of you for taking the time to read this work.

I hope the chapters would have hotter erotic content with actual convo so we would know how this great sibling love and romance unfolds .....well played .....great piece there so bring on more to the literotica table....the site needs another masterpiece from another great writer

I live the flowery prose that you graced this story with. But seriously...where's the story?! You say nothing of the "horrors" the two of you had to overcome, nor the way in which you two came to live your lifestyle. Don't get me wrong...I'm happy that the two of you have found solace together...but again you left a LOT of meat off this bone.

cant wait to see how this turns out.