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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A stoy that I did not expect

Here we have a story, an epic to be truthful that has the possibility to change lives.

Some additional editing may have changed the format, made it easier to digest, but would have never changed this story!

Please post more and allow us to read!

OceandiverOceandiverover 4 years agoAuthor
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thedayafterthedayafterover 4 years ago
Interesting story

The story unfolds slowly and reading it is like reading someones diary of events.

Looking forward to reading more.

PrinceLukePrinceLukeover 4 years ago
Suspense

I did not expect that, i thought that she has asked her brother to kill the drunk driver. 5 stars from me.

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Just a little note, the story that I am creating, The End of Innocence, has 18 chapters. I started working on it under another name, Sacred Love. The original draft was completed several years ago but did not totally comply to Literotica's standards. The rewrite fixed all t...

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