by Cromagnonman
But a good ending, for a couple of nice people who now have a better life ahead of them.
A damned good story; almost worthy of being script for some TV film or similar.
Thank You
Very good plot.
The dialogue drug on for a painful period, however. Then it rushed through to the ending, and then the ending was much too cut and dry.
Just ask me next time to read for continuity and clarity, I'd be glad to help.
I enjoyed the development of this story. The earlier rape by her father explains his later reaction to George’s rape and ties the whole story together. Nicely done.
Good story!!!!!! but I still want more *****
but no "happily ever after"? (I mean give us the sentences of the two mates).
What about Roslyn's mother did she become the loved grandmother that Sam's mother is?