All Comments on 'End of the Line'

On to another really good story. Just like this one.

Send is he hooked up with someone who clearly knew he was cheating... But I'll assume she didn't tell him because she wasn't sure he'd believe her or something. Otherwise s fine tale...

I really liked this one, and gave it 4.5 stars. I think I've read the story that this was based off of, and it never was really finished. I think it was either a 750 word story, or a quick "flash" story, where all the details were just glossed over. This story had some real meat to it, and kept the reader involved. Thanks for sharing it with us.

5 stars for this Saddletramp opus...

...no surprise, that.

Not even close to your best work... My first thought was TRIPE.

The fact the the cousin says "So you finally know about Jodi" tells me that she knew and never said anything, I wouldn't have hooked up with her because she kept the secret as well, leaving George in the dark.

Great ST1956 story, l’ve read this but never scored it. Fixed that up now, 5/5.

Overall I did like this story and the ending, but the new wife knew her cousin was cheating but kept quiet. If she claimed to love him, she should've warned him as soon as she found out..

Excellent story! 5 BIG UNS,

So Lisa apparently knew Joni was cheating and never mentioned it, but loves George. Huh.

Nice and your right no husband ever wants to hear the words we need to talk or honey we need to talk

OXYGEN ABUSERS

You've improved a lot since you wrote this.

Okay. Three stars.

All the calling Joni "bitch" , call me Mr Du..., and hooking up instantly with Lisa was a bit much.

Big Saddletramp fan, but this isn't one of his better ones, to much like many other LW. stories on Lit. Saddletramps are usually that much better.

Saddletramp this was fun for that 5 stars big fan here

This was a great story and much, much better than the original story. Five stars!!! I loved how Cliff got his revenge on Jim Simpson for beating up his daughter. I loved that in this story, the good guys win. I love that. Too often it is the other way around. Great story!!!!

Good the bitch got what she deserved, but he left one slut for another one? She always has the hots for him sure, but to get rid of his feelings and instantly got hooked on her cousin, yeah right I see him getting cucked and btb all over again.

Yeah, the trampster is big on lasagna. Funny some authors are big on fishing, some other things, and the ideal cheating wife often loves the MCs favorite things. Anyhow liked the story. The hook up with the cousin was kind of too easy. But otherwise good.

A fun but oft repeated theme. It’s been done so many times that it’s hard to find a different scene, but this was well done enough to get 5 stars.

Bill S.

"So, you finally know about Joni?" she (Lisa) asked. Sounds like she knew what Joni was doing but did not tattle. How can he trust Lisa?