All Comments on 'End-of-the Year Party'

really enjoyed your tale, well written with a good cross between depravity without going too far, cheers

Interesting story well constructed, finely written and meticulously edited. I'm going to guess you make a living writing, but if you don't - you should!

Rye and Ginger Ayle

I liked this story. It was a refreshing change on most of the stuff here. I agree with the comment that you seem to be a professional writer. I don't know about Megan though, she seems too easy for her circumstance... but then again, I guess you have to expect quick development in short stories.