by ltpc
Entertaining to say the least, just keeps getting better. Guess some critics donโt understand literary license, Iโm sure the proverbial pot is heating up. Thanks for sharing
It's mind numbing. Not the writing, but the story. Why would the writer go to exposure so soon? There should have been a few things that happened that could have revealed it each getting harder to stop or hide. Then a big one to end the world....... I mean reveal the secret. I can understand some of the characters being foolishly happy about this reveal, but Chris and Anna shouldn't. One is human and the other raised partially human. This reveal is going to be a train wreck. I know the writer can make them do what he/she wants. Human nature is easy to predict. When people realize these beings exist there is going to be trouble. Someone kills a cheating lover? A couple puncture marks and a vampire did it. Or some claw marks and a were did it. Also you have the idiots that will lose their mind. Vampires exist? they will kill us in our sleep and must be destroyed. Were beings exist? they will go on a blood thirsty rampage and kill us. There will be no working together. Humans can't even get along with other humans, and you think they will get along with people that can easily kill them? I can see the reaction now(If the writer had not abandoned the story) They can do things we can't, so they are dangerous and must be destroyed.
That is the future( if the writer ever picks it back up) How about the now? The president is negotiating with the beings. The go between is the NSA agent. The one that already admitted she is compromised. Why would the humans believe what she is saying? Seems to me this would be like saying hi I'm a turncoat, but listen to me and we will get things done.
I understand in these stories the writer wants to make the hero the most important part of it. Not sure how that works here. The synod sits by and does nothing while this new being does the talking for them? This would be like a celebrity walking into a government meeting and trying to dictate peace agreements. It wouldn't happen.
Now to my problem with Anna. I understand she is young. What I don't understand is her reaction when he gets home. I want sex, he wants to think about everything that has happened. So since he wont fuck her, she thinks about raping him. Her thought is to force herself on him. This line and thinking has destroyed any feelings for the character. He has been gone a whole two days, had people try to kill him, been arrested and held captive, had to escape from the mystery being(I think demon) and deal with the possible war with the humans. All this and she wants to rape him? I'm sure she will stick around and cause all kinds of problems.
Just my point of view,
Buddy J.
P.S just because someone calls someone mom, doesn't make them related. This is not incest, and having the tag to trick people interested in that is sad.
Absolutely love this work. It's got shadowrun style to the revelation. Its got dragons.
Not just any dragons.
But sentient shape shifting dragons.
Hope your well and writing as much as you can.
I came to lit for erotic writings and found some of the best works I've ever read.
Thank you for such a gem to the fantasy genre
They are talentless and could not possibly do better.
Fuck them, I'll happily refund them their money
and you continue to your strong writing.
Story gets quite boring. 5 chapters of very little magic. You have a whole world of Beings but few moments to show us the magic and power of any of them. Hell Chris wonโt even change forms to go to sleep. To be half through the whole story he hasnโt learned much either. Seems like more filler than actual substance. Itโs a good story but the first couple chapters should be condensed. Then the rest really fill in the magic world.
This has to be one of the best multi-chapter story arcs I've read on this site!
I just finished binging the series and am eager to see more! Glad to see that you are on Patreon and have signed on as a supporter to keep abreast of the progress toward your next chapter! Keep up the great storytelling!
This is a story I've enjoyed and I have high standards. How bout you just write your own story where you can play out your fantasy. Let's how good they'll be ๐
Yes it's not perfect but I've really enjoyed it. Go get a life bro ๐๐
Fantastic book...cant stop reading....simply aweome
When the story started, "Endangered" obviously referred to the status of the Dragon species. This chapter, and Radek still being at-large, raises the possibility that it might also refer to all Beings and Humans.
Radek didn't strike me as the type that would let a peaceful Revelation prevent him from trying to reach his (unspecified) goals.
You are living up to your standards. Thank you.
On a lighter note, it's sad that your president is just so much better than any of the real ones. I try to imagine the gobshites handling such a situation nowadays and my mind shuts down and goes on leave - a nice holiday on a beach somewhere.
I did have a couple of questions:
First, do dragons have breath weapons in your world? I would think it would have come up by now.
Second, wouldn't a local area dispel be a serious weapon against invisible vamps?
I would think that something along the line of a small-scale magical emp would undo a lot of lesser enchantments, and having that invisibility spell go poof in daylight would be a real bitch for a vamp!
I was wondering if Ether could be used along those lines, to disrupt magical energies in the Norm...
Just thoughts that wouldn't go quiet :)
Loving the story, especially the way the fast pace isn't really changing Chris.
Jason
You are back ! Excellent story so far, I look forward to more and more. I had read the first 5 chapters then put it in my 'To follow up' section. Just re-read this chapter to get back in the story. I had forgotten the details, Love the Bovine twist. Am looking forward to the Female Dragon meeting, that should throw a kink in his plans too. And I'm suspecting it could be Both of them...
The fact that the humans have not already found them is more disconcerting. I see you as a person enjoying SCP wiki.
I am glad to see you active again ltpc..we have waited this long without knowing solidly whether you would come back..now we know that you are well and active in this site ....atleast I will be glad to wait for your story with much more confidence
Sorry to hear that RL has been sucking for you. FWIW, I don't think it's a dick move to retreat and regroup in the face of pain and suffering, so please, don't go beatin' yourself up for doin' what you needed to do. As I've heard said: Those who matter don't mind; those who mind don't matter.
Be well, knowing you've got TONS of us hoping the best for you (perhaps with a teeny bit of self-interest involved), and waiting on tenterhooks for your next offering.
Looking forward to whatever you are willing to share!
Chapters 6 and 7 are both done, waiting for edit and posting.
I will release 6 asap. 7 will be held until I'm happy with 8 which I'm just sinking my teeth into now.
If you have written it. post it. u'll probably get busy and stop writing before that day ever comes that ur ready to post. why not post what u have already, get the positive comments to motivate you to keep writing and update previous chapters as necessary.
That's great news can't wait for the next chapter happy to see your still keeping up with it
It's still going to be a while until I post Chapter 6, sorry. I'm well into 7 and I expect to want to be about half way through 8 before posting. Thanks for the support everyone.
Has anyone heard from again since he posted the other day I'm worried he's just going to disappear on us again I really want to see this story finished
I was so excited to see your post on your profile that you are working on this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. This is one of my favorite stories on lit and I constantly come back to re-read it even though it was left unfinished. I hope everything works out in your life and you find the time to finish this story properly. Either way I just wanted to say thank you for the work you put into it. I don't think most of the commenters realize just how much time and effort goes into creating a masterpiece like this.....that they are enjoying for free. So thank you and keep up the good work. Really looking forward to next chapters.
Great story!! Let's have the next chapter! If you want to make changes to the storyline after, go for it, but don't let the doubt hold back your creativity!
Glad to see you back LTPC...such a great story, have been hoping there would be an eventual continuation (so many left unfinished, didn't want this to be another one!) Looking forward to the release of Ch. 6 when you determine the direction for 7+!!!
Too many authors have written parts of a story and then dropped off of the map. Thank you for coming back and writing more :)
We wish chapter 6 will be posted soon..but damn man your presence in literotica is more than enough for me now..B-)
Chapter 6 has been content complete almost since I stopped. I'm holding it so I don't pigeon hole myself if I want to make changes.
HE UPDATED HIS PROFILE. 30,000 WORDS INTO THE NEW STORY. KEEP UP THE HOPE FOLKS!
..well hopefully... was really surprised when I saw on my lit feed that you updated your profile! At least there's hope of an upcoming update! Anyway welcome back!
I've created a patreon page where you all can vote on which works you want to see completed.
As it stands Fate of Terra by Intrepid Fate is leading the way by a large margin. If you want to contribute to the voting come on over, its free to do so.
JC
www.patreon.com/jc_the_continuer
If you can read this and real life made it impossible to continue i understand. But if you quit because of negative trolls on the internet than i have 0 respect for that. If you are a writer and cannot ignore the negative nancies out there then i have no clue why you have posted it in a public place for people like me to find, read, and love, then get left in the lurch. I hope you either complete it or delete it, also to be honest, neither would ameliorate me.
Ok I give up. Just another author that will never finish. I'll add it to the pile.
Even if your life has taken a different turn and you have found enjoyment and satisfaction elsewhere, know that you have engaged at the very least myself sublimely. I re read this and I don't mean for it to sound pretentious. I found this story diverting, such a welcome escape from the sweat of real life. Although incomplete t has been a joy. bm.
"You are simply granting us a non-exclusive right to publish your story on Literotica.com... ...all rights to the story still belong to you, the author.
" - Literotica FAC
"The copyright isn't with the individual writer, it is with the site." - JC_The_Continuer
JC missed on that one. Maybe it was just poor communication. Either way I would have expected better from someone aspiring to complete unfinished stories.
I thinK he reads ever thing we write on here and Laughs at us he could At least last know something say he's done anything but no he reads are we writing comments and laughs
I agree. Thus why I am not doing anything unless I am granted permission. The copyright isn't with the individual writer, it is with the site. The site own the rights to Endangered as it stands, thus I need their permission to take over the story.
To get permission I also need to follow a couple standards they've set out. Including the alterations of main characters, introduction of new characters added to that I need to move away from the original plot as quickly as possible. Its why my POTN continuation moved very quickly and a huge amount of plot was pushed into a timespan of only 2 days.
I also wouldn't use Wikipedia as a credible source as each copyright is due and unto itself and each have their own clauses. I give you Robin WIliams, his film's weren't allowed on TV for 1 year after his death while his voice pieces are not allowed for a further 20/25 years after his death, thus why Disney dropped their plans to make another Aladdin.
JC
@JC_The_Continuer: even if LTPC died today, his copyright would be "active to protect his work" for the next 70 years (according to U.S. laws, in some countries it's even longer). https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_countries%27_copyright_lengths
They took down the story log for some reason. Probably the same reason as why I've been denied the overall story continuation. LTPC hasn't given me permission, and has been active on the site of late (2016) and thus his copyright is still active to protect his story.
JC
They won't let them put it up become Itpc has been active he need to let us no you let some one finish it that can tired of him ignoring us
Story Log is complete
the upload will be soon, expect the next chapter to occur in the coming month and a half.
JC
To all:
I am a continuation writer and my team and I are happy to announce the story will live.
I've contacted the author and if there is no response then I will continue the tale. I hope that you check out my other work before judging us to harshly. We work hard and do our job to the best of our abilities.
Expect something along the lines of a Story Log to appear while we work out some key ideas. Let us know what your thinking and where you spot some of our mistakes in the Story Log
JC
he has NovusAnimus in his favorite athor list and hes a new writer like 2016 new so eather hes alive and just doesnt have time to write or just doesnt want all the hatred from an unfinished story orrrrrr some one else is using his acount but makes u think where he is cause its been almost 2 years just hate when i find another... Intrepid_Fate seems like all my favorite stories are going un finished
It can't just end like this. A story this great must be finished.
Don't give up my fellow readers the fabled author has to return a story this good can't die so tragically.
"... and they all lived happily ever after!"
I asked Etaski, LTPC's editor for chapters 4 and 5, and she hasn't heard anything from LTPC either. No drafts, no correspondence. A search on Google reveals only these 5 chapters (I've seen authors switch to different sites. That does not appear to be this case). I wouldn't expect another chapter to be posted, which is unfortunate, because this story has a fantastic premise and I would love to see a continuation of the world-building and plot.
So disappointed this has ended! This is without a doubt in my top ten on this site. So much potential, too! So many paths to take from here! Wish LTPC would write some more...
I can it believe you would this here. This could be a. Awesome novel...one that I would purchase..... very disappointed this was the end and how it ended.
the is nothing i despise most than when i find a gorgeous story,fall really hard for her,then she breaks up with me.
>see only 5 chapters
>don't bother looking at date completed so I avoid knowing if it was completed or not
>finish reading chapter 5
>read date completed
>17 months ago
>fuck
Welp, another story to add to my bucket list of stories that will never be completed. I found the story really good and it's a shame this'll be it. Honestly, for some reason I didn't really like how the events unfolded, mainly the whole Secret being revealed aspect. It might be because these events now detract from a story that focuses on Chris coming to terms with his species but that's just me. Doesn't really matter now anyway.
ltpc if you're not dead or something I thank you for this story and wish you the very best.
Love this story. Enjoy all the little snippets of pop culture you've added in. Quoting a nerds gallery of TV show's. Your writing and pacing are excellent I sincerely hope you are alive and kicking and just taking a sabbatical from this story. IF, you finish this on another forum or publish please let us know. I would certainly pay to read it.
Why does this always happen! I find a briliant story on this site, I get really into it and then it just ends, not finishes but ends with no given reason. I understand that something may have occured that made it impossible for the itpc to post and i do not mind in that minner of speaking, it just so frustrating for something so briliant not to have been finish.
to my knowledge tempest there is no chapter 6 in the making nor are there any updates that i have heard of, ive sent him emails through the Lit contact system and gotten no response at all so as far as i know hes dead or just doesn't give two fucks about continuing a story people have enjoyed so much
Why god why, why won't he finish this great story and one know of any updates or changes??
who knows maybe he died things like this happen,thatsthe only reason i can think of for him not finishing this story, that or he just doesnt give two fucks about his fans
This is an amazing story, and one of my all time favorites. I really hope you are just in sabbatical man, and not leaving this story to be yet another unfinished story among a myriad of others. Please come back, or at least tell is you are well and truly done and not coming back.
what i won't do to have the next chap of this series :/
sigh..
anybody got any idea what he's been upto??
Anybody have an updates on the status of the editing of the next chapter?
I was reading this chapter for the umpteenth time and found out there is an anagram in the architect's surname.
Stephen Sibon. Sibon <=> Bison. I guess it fits, as he's a werebison
Are jus making up stuff or is new chapter in the works it been almost a year
So the 80% comment is in his bio also its out dated so really all we are waiting on is the editor whom ltpc can't control even if he gets a new one it'll still take time for the new editor to go over the same stuff the last guy has gone over(given how personal lives can get in the way it may not be much) then pick up from there, so just have some patients...... even if it has been nearly a year since the last posting
Pleas this is a wonderfully well written story and it deserves to be finished. Please don't do know it or yourself the dishonor of leaving it unfinished.
The series is really good, I hope the next part comes out soon.
This story is my absolute favorite in the sci fi genre. Can't wait until the next chapter(s) are published. Hopefully soon please.
This is a really good read but part 6 probably won't be sent to his editor until 90% or somewhere closer to 100
Awesome read. Hope we will see more!! Thanks for sharing your talent.
I love it and would absolutely love to see it turned into a novel or better yet a series of! Looking forward to more and hopefully soon!
Soooo glad to hear there's a chapter six in the works.
You updated that chapter 6 is 80% complete. I think you have given it to your editor by now? Hope to see you much soon than sooner.
Just wish he would let us know he's still writing it I keep checking in weekly
I was rereading this great story and stumbled across a Firefly quote in chapter 4: "if someone tries to kill you, you kill them right back". Was a nice surprise, didn't expect that.
Anyways, this is a great story. Please continue it!
Honestly one of the best stories I've read in a long time! I wish it was an actual book to read. The plot and character development are fantastic, so bravo, certainly one of the harder aspects for authors to nail down IMO.
I can't wait for chapter 6, I have a feeling it's going to be a very eventful addition to this story. Cheers mate and keep writing!
But as it seems most of us here are quite ok with waiting a while for an update to a story as good as this one. Here's hoping it doesn't go the way of 'Path of the Necromancer' and stay unfinished.
I'd love to see lesbian mixes within the harem..and of course Chris, being the center of
I have to know how this ends it's killing me!!! Please submit more!!!
It's an amazing story. I just wish you'd finish it. Sorry if I seem rude with that, but a story like this NEEDS to be finished. From what I can see, you have a chapter or two more you could possibly write from where you stopped here. Here's hoping you finish this masterpiece
one of the best stories ive ever read. so good ltpc u could be a professional writer.
So this is a truely excellent story. Sex, adventure and a great story.
It's also an absolute shame as well. 7 months and no chapter 6.... Incomplete stories, especially the great ones, are the bane of my Literotica experience. It's as if I've wasted my afternoon reading the first 5 chapters. I understand that the story is free, however as the author, don't you want to see your masterpiece complete?
If this story is still incomplete and you are reading this comment then don't bother with this story. Only disappointment will follow.