All Comments on 'Endangered Species Ch. 33-40'

You do it every time! Your stories are so good that I loose track of time and 5 pages doesn’t seem long enough. Great job!

Great writing. Very impressed with your story line.

I called for Coles punishment and was shocked when it came. I think he regretted his

Previous choices but I was on the side of the murdered humans. Can’t wait to see what else

You bring to the table. Thanks

Wow!!! I'm glad Cole knew it wasn't a good idea to mate with Angela.

This is getting good.

Wow, did not see that coming, I was floored when alpha Cole was killed. It looks like we are going to see a strong female alpha, who doesn’t need an alpha male at her side, to save the rest of humanity, and straighten out the wolves too. I do hope the wolf council, and especially Edward get their just desserts in the end, please, please, please make it so. Thanks. KS

Interesting turn of events, and then another, and then another. You DO enjoy keeping us readers on our toes.

I too was shocked at Cole's death, that possibility didn't occur to me. Now you have opened up a whole new world of opportunities. Great writing as always PW and keep the chapters coming. ELS

Realy amazing this moves so fast, hope she wipes out the council.

Really amazing this moves so fast, hope she wipes out the council.

I was casually interested in this story, the first of yours I've looked at. This posting made me REALLY interested. Well done. Cole's death was unexpected; so necessary for the story to be more than just another formula story.

CreepyDragon is right, even five pages isn’t enough when the writing is this good. I couldn’t believe they shot Cole, but then those in power will do almost anything to stay in power. Maybe this ranger will realize the benefits of accepting the change. Who knows? He might end up Angela’s next mate. Thank you for sharing your talents with us. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Obviously, morality requires Cole to pay for his crimes, one way or another. It also disposes of the morally flawed hero.

I was angry with the character of Cole, but he shouldn't have been killed. He realized that he was wrong and that he wanted to be a better Alpha. Please, by some miracle, let him be still alive. By Luna grace!

Hi "Part-Wolf": Great story as always. But I've noticed that this story and the last one "Missing" have a much darker tone than all the earlier ones. More "Realpolitik" ? Perhaps you have been influenced by the wars and meaningless deaths of the last 2 years? I guess there won't be any fairy tale ending now that Cole is dead ?

Seems strange that Cole & his Beta wolves did not prepare better for violence when the verdict was being read. Or even smarter just kick out all the wolves from the other packs when the Council insisted on punishing Cole. Cole's pack had the best fortified home and also the best supplies, so it would be hard for the other packs to come back and defeat them