All Comments on 'Ending Remorseful Nights'

by Egmont Grigor

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Started well but ended up in la la land

Thanks for writing, your efforts are appreciated. Your story started well but then I found I was more and more perplexed by the actions of the entire family. Your orge at the end was completely credulous. Thanks anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
allmost true

she would have had an affair or more, but she would have never let her friends fuck the husband. the first part about women you got wright but for sure not the second

Orion623Orion623over 15 years ago
Enjoyed The Story

This little tale was written in a lighthearted manner with humor spread throughout. Very well done. While there were parts of the story that required a suspension of disbelief ( the antics at the celebratory party ) on the whole it was fun to read with a couple of interesting characters.

rixelsrixelsover 10 years ago
A Tale of Ephemeral Middle Aged Madness

A wonderful story of a family with a lot of love and a little madness.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
very dry

an affair or was it a business deal? very dry dialog.

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