by Egmont Grigor
Thanks for writing, your efforts are appreciated. Your story started well but then I found I was more and more perplexed by the actions of the entire family. Your orge at the end was completely credulous. Thanks anyway.
she would have had an affair or more, but she would have never let her friends fuck the husband. the first part about women you got wright but for sure not the second
This little tale was written in a lighthearted manner with humor spread throughout. Very well done. While there were parts of the story that required a suspension of disbelief ( the antics at the celebratory party ) on the whole it was fun to read with a couple of interesting characters.
A wonderful story of a family with a lot of love and a little madness.