All Comments on 'Endings Ch. 03'

Sigh. Max just doesn't keep up with the latest relationship news, does he? Someone get him an issue of Cosmo. ;) Nicely done, and I like Paul.

I like Max and i think Paul has some explaining to do :D cos till now it sounds too much like a fairytale...

you have no idea how good this chapter is, i think it is amazing, i rarely ever comment. i just had to because it just pushes all the buttons of a good romantic plot, and the actions of the sex that took place, was just everything i find hot and sexy. keep on writing please, and can't wait for your next installment. cheers

Max deserves much better - is Paul all that? I hope so, would hate to see Max be hurt twice like that. Great writing, btw.

Firstly, great chapter, very steamy. I miss Cam though. I think he's Max's 'one'. I have mixed feelings about the Paul situation. He is very similar to cam... Too similar maybe??? Cant't wait for the next chapter!

I think I wouldn't have like this story if Cam wasn't put out of the picture. The fact that you evoke such animosity towards a character in me makes this, at least to me, a good read.

Even if the twin brothers' sons situation isn't very credible, Max is. And it does make a nice twist, not so much a generic story. Good job. Very good.

Dagnabbit! After chapter 2 I was really hoping that someone would pop-up on the radar - and he did. Paul. After chapter 3 I really hope that he is 'the one'. With the title, who knows? :o. You were so genius as to not reveal the answer in the prologue. Meanie! Lol, loved this immensely. I just hate that Max is doubting himself so - but if he didn't the story would've been much shorter I guess. So hi-five for emotion - its an important ingredient and you're the best at potraying it. Wonderful stuff! Thanks for sharing... Cat

This story is turning out really well.

Lmfao, when Max spat out the coffee.

Omg I need Cam's POV lol

I feel bad for you Max. Cam really messed thing up.

Max is a slutttttttt 😂 but I like Max