All Comments on 'Endings Ch. 05'

Max is being juvenile. Cam wasn’t in the wrong cuz he was straight up from the jump. Unfair how he gets the blame from his own fiancée, Paul and even Max to an extension. Paul should’ve been more open about why he didn’t want Cam around Max.

I think it's max who needs a good shake not Paul. Paul's reason for being insecure is completely understandable, and I think Max was just being an arsehole. Didn't he think once how Paul would feel about him being around Cam? Also he got so offended by one bad comment by Paul who literally treats him like a damn angel but let Cam literally treat hike like a whore?

He's punishing Paul for no reason. Absolute petulant little shit.

Yeah Max is being super harsh Anon I agree!

K??? Great writing...im still loving the story.... But does anyone else find max annoying? Childish? His stupid insistence that cam didnt hurt him and then gettin angry at paul for defending him.i felt like slapping the shit out of him. Come on man.. Get real. I skipped over a lot of the chapter

P.s im not critiquing the writer, just d character... And that shows what a great story this is that i actually feel how real the characters are😁😚

HOLY FUCKING SHIRDSFHjRfUBvD

Omg

I love all the dark emotions in this chapter of the story! It just makes it all the more believable.

My apologies... Cat

The Reason, by Hoobastank comes to mind... 'I'm not a perfect person, theres many things I wish I didn't do - but I continue learning...' If all else fails, I suggest Paul start quoting some of the lyrics. Thanks for another fantastic read... Great stuff. Can't wait for the finale... Cat

Love, love, love it!

All I can say is this better have a happy ending. Fromt he title I just don't know. Cam and Paul do need to grow up. However, there is such a thing as forgiveness. After bashing their heads in of course!! Good job as always. Love your work.

To leave us hanging like this. ;) OH, but that's half the fun. Can't wait for more. Nathan's a brave lad.

As always. I can't wait to find out how this is all going to work out. The suspense is great, even if I just want to know what's going to happen between them.