All Comments on 'Endless Summer Ch. 02'

yeah much better this time. ( I'm the ball guy btw). Liked it a lot in fact. I can't wait to read the next part. He could still have bluffed his way out of trouble by threatening to expose his sister to her friends, her class mates and the rest of the family though. But id like to find out what happens now, 5*

wow! hope you write the next part soon, I cant wait to see what happens!

Thanks for feedback. I am doing follow up. I was discourage with response from part one, but story took longer to set up then I thought. I am thinking maybe one or two more parts.

As the title suggests i definitely enjoyed part 2 of this story and i am looking forward to part 3 when you get the time to write it. Your main character is flawed but i get the impression that he is actually a nice person which is a combination that i like.

I am definitely interested in seeing what happens next.

This needs another chapter.

Damn this story got more and moer dumb as i read on. But im stupid too for wasting time on it.

Seriously no guys are that stupid. Atleast make it a little realistic.

Both chapters held my interest, looking forward to the next chapter or even two if that is what it takes to finish. I identified with the kid as a HS freshman, then I got really big weight lifting. I was still a very passive kid until some asshole pushed my buttons then I became a raging motherfucker when really pissed which occurred Several times in High School. By college I had learned to settle down and take things in stride. That served me well through my 33 years in the Military. sTars

Endless trash.