All Comments on 'Enemies to Lovers'

Really enjoyed this story and the way it was written. Can’t wait for more.

Your first “wlw” story; well I hope it is not your last. You created a wonderfully romantic, intensely erotic story around two believable/identifiable characters, and succeeded in doing so with unconventional style, without dialogue (almost unheard of), in violation of the “show don’t tell” rule of creative writing — all rules are meant to be broken and in this case for good effect — and without providing measurements and bra sizes (so easy to visualize your protagonists). The erotic flares combined perfectly with moments of angst/hesitation/awkwardness — it felt so like the first time for two lovers just as you intended. Both perspectives close out an impressively crafted piece, and Bailee is right — a good ending. As a near hopeless romantic hope you follow up in whatever style/format. Definitely 5 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I really enjoyed this story and hope you continue with the next chapter!

Rules? Rules, really? This story was completely and utterly amazing. More non stop sex than I generally like (more the slow burn) but this one really sizzled and you should be very pleased with result. You have crafted a lovely relationship and a hot story all in one, not bad for a day's work (or two or three).

Brilliant. No dialogue. Not needed. This was so beautifully descriptive and one could feel the angst of the characters getting to know each other and the love they were discovering between each other. To be honest.......as a man I felt my pussy clenching......that's how good it was.

I'm not sure you should think about a sequel........yes you could portray more sex.....I'm not sure how you portray more loving emotion. Well done. A.