All Comments on 'Enemy Lines Ch. 01-04.5'

Awesome story! Can't wait for more. Thank you!

Keep writing.

Can I have some more sir.

I love it so far, although the starting is a bit foreboding... I hope its a happily ever after ending though ^^.

This was posted on the xeno thread on 4chan's /aco/ board. I hope you're the OP writer that wrote this there

More please

Yeah, it's me anon. Same namefag, same fag name. It just goes up on 4chin first because this site has a long-ass wait time between submission and post, and I didn't know it existed until someone in the last /xeno/ thread mentioned it.

Just remember to read you stuff aloud ( or in your head) to avoid awkward sounding quotes.

Since Merc" is an abbreviation of "mercenary", is it pronounced "merse" or "merk"?

-Rei

As a dirty Yank, I'm inclined to say it as "Merk"

Damn good. I've read a lot of crap, here and elsewhere. Good writing doesn't just happen. Plot, dialogue, characterization, even a sense of direction (of the plot): Takes planning and forethought.

Excellent submission. Looking forward to more.

Possibly the most creative piece of erotic prose I have ever read. Very impressive.

Puma0916@hotmail.com

Okay, so this must be one of the best. Like in ever. With the bonus being that it also very sexy. Her additional alien attributes were introduced in ways that made her more sensual, instead of the 'the little thing that goes whir and gets all mechanical at lunch-time'. And now I'm really shitting myself concerning 'Sister's' jealous streak.

This story is exactly what I look for on literotica. Great plot and lead off to the next chapter. Also like how you started it out too. Never know if that is the end middle or beginning.

Write us another story!

Nate should fight against the extremist rebels and inform his comrades in the Empire that aliens can be friends since they are just as complex as humans.

So far so good. Loved that Ketri likes purple panties, can't go wrong with purple panties, lol. Seems that they have explored sex to it's fullest and have had fun doing it. Onward to the next chapters.