All Comments on 'English for Sinners Ch. 03'

.... ""It's...it's Vivika," she admitted, her voice cracking a bit before she continued. "I started hanging out with her and Van last year, during the summer, and ever since then she's made me...do things. "

Haven't you got your girls mixed up again? Shouldn't that have been "...with her and Val ..."?

Yes, I likely got them mixed up. I thought giving these V names would be cute at first, but man it's made it confusing. I caught a lot of the errors, but it seems at least one made it through. I'll try to be more vigilant.

Harry Potter was warned never to eat or drink anything offered to him by an enemy. It is not yet clear whether the girls are friends or enemies. So far, they seem more interested in their own interests and using him regardless of the consequences to him.

There are obvious ethical issues with a teacher having sex with a student, but sinful? I suppose fornication can be considered sinful, but that is mild compared to the incest, cheating, and other less traditional themes that populate this site.

I'm looking forward to part four.