by edharian
With Mom and Dad all hot to trot, maybe the kids could get the parents involved.
You have one great story going here .Been reading from the first chapter and have love them all .Hope you keep going . Thanks ......
Just wondering if they'll be talk of this being a two week trip, or new lifestyle for these siblings. I enjoy new lifestyles for siblings, but either way, for them to discuss their intentions will fill out a great tale.
Thank-you
I have to agree that you should leave the parents out of it except for being shocked or surprised then giving them their ok. Most every story I have read lately about brother and sister has spoiled it by bring other people into the mix. Just let it stay with the brother and sister. Also you need to write more then one page, One page is just to short!! Try to write at least two pages.
That was brilliant. So good that I forgot to write earlier comments. Please carry on writing more on this story
The title says it all! Please keep the chapters coming! Each chapter is exceptional so far!
The is one of my all time favorite stories! I honestly need this to continue! When is the next chapter coming?
if they stop before completion to watch television, even if it Jon Stewart.
Loving this story edharian, keep it up! Reminds me of my baby sister I've always wanted to tangle with... Often, in high school, I got the feeling she thought of it as well.....
Really a great read that had me standing at attention. My one quibble is: how are they both so good at the sex stuff when they’re both still pretty young? Is it from watching an abundance of porn? Not likely. Watching porn wouldn’t eliminate her gag reflex like that. She seems to be a pro. That doesn’t mean I don’t love this story but a little realism would make it a bit more authentic. Or at least call out the fact that they’re so in sync when it comes to their sexual escapades. Keep up the great work! ❤️❤️👍👍