All Comments on 'Enki's Puzzle Pt. 01'

A Groundhog Day story but involving consensual incest...interesting. Very interesting...the kid's kind of...a jerk...but so's his dad. Saying a kid needs a beating, yeah, very paternal. If he does that with his kid, he might have or does something bad to his wife perhaps (which is terrible to think about).

Maybe Enki could appear and speak about the shades of gray involving incest, both the consensual and nonconsensual, romantic and nonromantic. Damn, this is really damn intriguing.

Well, you've got me hooked.

It will be very interesting to see how you develop the story until he manages to get his mother and sister involved. Characterisation is also good so far, Nick and his Dad both not too likeable at the moment.

4**** but hopefully will evolve into 5*****

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Could have called it Groundhog lay.

Loved the first instalment and as usual the character development is spot on. Looking forward to the next chapter and those following.

Please make your text only stories free for everyone on your website rawlyrawls.com

and put Google ads (Adsense) on yor free content

And charge a fees to remove the ads (on text only stories)

That way more people will visit your website and Google will pay you a good amount

I absolutely agree with the post before mine, using Ads for reading your text only stories will both grant you well deserved money and give tons of people the possibility to read them for free and eventually push them to pay for access the illustrated one.

A win - win proposition

Well, I just finished Ch. 27, and came back here to write this review. The story is one of the best I’ve read here. I’m looking forward to future chapters. Thank you.

I am in the middle of the online manga of this right now and I must say its the BEST story I ever had the pleasure to read. I hope the manga series of this continues to completion.