All Comments on 'Enki's Puzzle Pt. 02'

Falling on the floor is going to be real old 'tomorrow'. At least he doesn't have to play the same game over again.

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Loving the creative way you've brought mother and son together, and I'm eager to read the next installment! Fantastic writing!

Great start. Looking forward to Sis joining the adventures

Take it slow, keep building it up. Don't rush it! Well written!

I think Enki's playing a longer game than what it seems. The lesson's not over yet.

Always a pleasure to read your stories.

Falling to the floor is gonna get really painful if the day repeats itself.

One question though, no magical enormous cock for the MC? Seems wrong somehow.

Really like this story-line. Very good adult take on Groundhog Day --- Bill Murray would approve (I think).

finally he escape!