All Comments on 'Enki's Puzzle Pt. 04'

You tease!!! :)

Chapters 1 - 9 are complete. Chapters will arrive on Literotica about a month apart.

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Thanks for reading!

Chapters are to short needs to be longer

Hell yeah. Well done, again, man!

Definitely playing the long game with this one. Can’t wait for the next chapter

great story, great idea, keep it up! :)

Still a judgmental douche, at least in part. Enki's really gotta make it clear to him that that's not how to do it. He satisfied her, or at least her tried so that's good. but he's gonna soon learn he'll need to give both ladies the ultimate pleasure not only to escape the loop, but to learn Enki's lesson/truly be good for the ladies.

So first, I have been reading you for a while and you are an amazing writter. The stories are rivetting and then some. A bit sad to see you reducing the scope of your writing behind a paywall but you do you. Still loving that take on groundhog Day.

I love this!

Another fine day (so to speak). Great job and thanks again for writing this series.