All Comments on 'Enki's Puzzle Pt. 06'

I am still enjoying every new twist. Great story. Thanks for sharing with us. 5 stars..

That poor bird…….

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Chapter to short

So basically now we end up in a repeat of every other story? We're the lead suddenly gets a big dick and women's tits grow for no reason? Your stories are good enough with out that plot thread required in each and every one.

With time the story is getting repetitive, boring and Annoying.

It was fantastic up until now upto this part, but this one wasn't really exciting at all.

Disappointed.

Very interesting story. Well written. I am hooked. Thanks.

i have read all of your story, and all of them are very amazing i loved them.

plz update on literotica soon for us poor people who can't pay.

Great read. Sexy intricacies 😁😛🥸

With the birds keep hitting the window, it’s reminding me of the Prime show, The Terminal List.

love the story.

The idea he has to try and try and try again until he finds exactly the right path of acting that opens them for him. Sis as his guide and now they crossed a line. swam through a lake or how to say it.

The logic of time loops is a bit difficult, everyone is in the loop with him. Or is there an allyson that is not affected by this at all? I try to not think too much about those paradoxes and your writing and the sensual scenes you lay out for us make that an easy task.

Thanks for writing and sharing!

Nice story plot twist. Really enjoying this series.