All Comments on 'Enki's Puzzle Pt. 21'

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Great story. I'm looking forward to Nick fucking his mother in the ass, and hopefully in the pussy, eventually. Hopefully he knocks the mother up and his idiot father is duped into believing he did it. Much of the fun is watching the mother's and sister's boundaries slowly crumble. Thanks for posting.

See you next fall I guess.

Cheers£ The many chapters are a masterpiece of artistic endeavour. A painter's strokes ;)) that unravel, change and take on new forms. The timpani, what a chamber orchestral background, better than thunder and lightning. It could have been Carmina Buranaesque, the way the choir is egging on the participants. The reversal of roles, where mother and daughter feed off each other, a twist that keeps on giving, with the dulcet tones of the birdie,

Wish the anal episodes were a bit drawn out. The dirtiness of it is titillating, The carrot could have served its purpose, but fancy Enki morphing it into a cucumber. That is indeed one rather sturdy specimen that gives some carnal delight and pain. Wow.

Great story! If I was a faster reader I would have read it in one sitting.

I dont understand how someone can litreally ruin such a great story(giving me GOT vibes) to this cuck shit now,

I know i am in no place to tell this but its just not me tho read the previous post's comments most people are talking about this same shit,

Why involve the sex with boyfriend & father when it has been a sole male story for 20 chapters and now all of a sudden this shit, i can understand the teasing shit or the background sex among them (i mean they are each other's literal love interest) but detailing the sex with them do u want us to feel cucked too?

I dont understand man please someone correct me if i am wrong this was my last straw i dont even comment but it was such a good story i returned every month to read this which is why i am so frustrated man its sad but wont be returning just to get nutted all over my face again

Honestly this started off pretty good, but has quickly gone downhill. Especially with the sister and chris.

What happened to the thief fantasy?