All Comments on 'Enki's Puzzle Pt. 22'

Great story. Thanks for posting.

Chapters 1 - 33 are complete, including the finale. Chapters will arrive on Literotica about a month apart.

If you want to read them sooner, or feel like supporting my writing, you can do that here: https://rawlyrawls.com

Thanks for reading!

Or I can just un-follow you.... Your 2 pages a month pace, or pay, is extortion and shows how little respect you have for the vast majority of your readers.

Great story, love it!

I thought I had a decent idea of where this story was going, but I'm really not sure anymore

Why? Honestly, why a month apart? If it's about you making money on your site, then why o why would you post them on a free site? If you really want to make money, then don't put all your stories on a free site. Put like a chapter, or a prologue on here for each story only. Get people interested enough to pay for your material. What you are doing is counterproductive, because people with common sense will wait till you post them on here for FREE. So please do one or the other, this month a part crap is beyond annoying.

I just can't I usually like slow burners but this hot and cold bullshit with Kate is just not it and i found myself close to buying your material online to just get to the better parts but read the reviews and found out that when It does happen there's barely any action and it's not even that good like wtf

Laughing at the crybabies demanding the author post more free content faster. What are you going to do?

I really appreciate you posting on a free site and I hope you aren't soured on continuing to do so by the cranky folks complaining here.

This is a great story, please keep it going. You have a good knack at writing and storytelling. The editing is good also so your writing flows smoothly without distractions. Thanks for writing it's much appreciated 😊👍