by Tom Collins
Great little story! A great climax to that wonderfully tense and intense build up.
Hello Mr. Collins!
Your story, Enough For Me, was truly sweet and so very sensual. I could feel the anticipation on the plane ride and when Jack and Marty finally met face to face...well, that was just beautiful.
Great writing job! Thank you for the delightful read.
Mmmm..you know damn well what i think about that story..kiss!
j
you done good, another fine writing piece that's hot all throughout! i like the humor you incorporate into it.
imp
Keep them hot tales rollin', sweets. You are the best, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Mwah!
That's one sizzling story, darlin'! Your characters are sweet and very believable - not to mention the steamy sex. ;)
I agree with most of the PC on this story, Tom. This has a great build up of a common fantasy on the internet and it doesn't dissapoint with that hawt sex. It leaves the reader satisfied knowing the relationship between to the two characters continue on and on.
I love your work, the way it jumps out and grabs you. you really are so so talented. thankyou
Bloody hell that was hot ! I wish this story was three times as long.
Thank you to avidreadr for pointing me to your Sweet Music story, which was another experience that left me panting for more.
this is not enough there should be a continuation of this story. a sequel.
it was really hot and good but it would had been much better if they end up falling in love with each other and there's a divorce between jack and martin.
it would be much more hot,lovely,sweet and romantic if they are together.
so looking for a sequel.please.