by chasten
Pardon my profanity, but FUCKING WOW! I've read many stories here on Lit that were a lot longer but didn't say nearly as much or were half as well written. And this resonated, a wound that has long since headed but definitely left its scar. This was one of the easiest 5⭐s I've ever given.
Knowing both the pain of being unrequited as well as the pain of unrequitting someone you care for, well written and eloquent.
Sorry, I didn't like it much and I know not every one will but I gave it just 3 stars. Wasn't really a story at all and more like a statement. 3 ⭐⭐⭐'s
It’s not the content that stops me liking this, it’s the way you wrote it, it’s not flowing for me, it’s a bit too in the wind for me