by Swampcooler
What a great description of two people finally admitting that they were in love, no matter if they are cousins or not! Well done!
So many have an attraction, yet so few act on it. Fear of rejection and ridicle often overcomes love and lust.
One question... I BELIEVE
THEY ALL READY HAD THEIR LAST NAMES.
Two brothers, same last name, two children had the same last name...
One married, they would keep their FATHER'S LAST NAMES
Great story. Liked the characters and the way you used them to get the reader interested in the story. Liked the romance and the flow of the story. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Loved it, all of it !
One of your very best.
Loved the ending too. Odd that some people can't see it was meant to be an ironic joke, but whatever......
Well worth more than 5 Stars !
Rapier
I loved reading every word of this story. Great character development, believable plot, a major reveal at the end, and sex that a person can see in real life. No monster cocks, no insane sexual marathons, no talk of gargantuan, life threatening breasts. No punishment or defecation....just a great story about two people finding the resolve to love no matter where they found it. Bravo! I look forward to browsing anymore storiesnif you have any! Consider me a fan!
i liked the story. i just did not like the line of heather "a couple of guys tried it" about anal sex. i would have liked it if they were not hormone driven people. If they were people who does not have sex casually without love.
I really loved this...I had a crush on my cousin wen I was a teen and should have acted upon it but I also felt strongly, it was taboo and wrong. now, I have my doubts after a failed marriage.
I loved the style of writing and it was something that was always there...and obviously meant to be together. My parents certainly would not have accepted it nor would hers….beautifully written, touching end....
I shall read more of you
This is not a gene I enjoy. Having said that, you had a great start, you developed the characters and the plot well, and you delivered a good ending
Well done!! It has been going on for centuries and will continue. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.