All Comments on 'Entertainment Coordinators Ch. 01'

Like the fast, clever pacing; right on top of the Bill/Melissa story. Well done. :-)

I'm the opposite of the last poster. I'm not really a fan of the fast pace. And man, it's unrealistic AF. But, having said that, it's very well written, HAF, and has the potential for many future adventures, suiting nearly any preference. So you get a big 5 from me, short chapter notwithstanding.

Jedd

Chapter 1 covered the obligatory 'Hot chesty blondes ask him to do what he wants.' I greatly enjoyed writing it. They'll return later with something very different. For the rest of this series, I plan to do a wide variety of styles and encounters. An urgent quickie between meetings, a slow romantic scene on a beach, a surprise orgy, etc. If you have something special in mind, ask and you might be pleasantly surprised.

I'm focused on excitement and fantasy for this one, not realism. As an analogy, getting on a long highway in an exotic sportscar and mashing the gas pedal to the floor is a lot more fun than thinking about the insurance, speeding tickets, crazy cost of the car, etc. I'm not going to worry much about speeding tickets or insurance in this story. ;-)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Very good writing - very erotic concept