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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

My 2 cents

A good start to this story. I like the characters and the plot. I look forward to more on this story. Thanks for your time and your imagination.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 3 years ago
Excellent start to this story!

Looking forward to where you go with this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Very well written and incredibly entertaining. I look forward to what happens if and when Eydis appears outside and people see her. I would tend to believe she has transformation capabilities since that would aid the empire in dealing with other cultures or races.

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