All Comments on 'Epiphany Ch. 02'

Thanx for your efforts, anyhow.

that was pretty incredible! enjoy the way you write!

Things irked me. First,no way this group sex takes place with 3 people stone cols sober. You delved into the counselor's character and gave clues that she had issues then suddenly she's into full-on slut mode. You created 3 characters that had a measue of depth and abruptly they transform automoning thru 3 some like androids. I'm probably being far more judgemental because the story was rife with potential that to me was ultimately unrealized .