All Comments on 'Erica Admits Her Fantasy'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Sorry

Full of stereotypes and many errors. Really could use editing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
The only fantasy is the fantasy this author has that they can write.

Run of the mile "1."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Interracial not LWs

This story has benn done a thousand times Poorly written and just plain boring BBC all over again Loving Wives? I think not Interracial or Fetish

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Noticed Most of Your other Stories zre Interracial

Should continue to be Wrong category Story has been done to often Just a slut cucking her husband YUK

njlaurennjlaurenalmost 12 years ago
fragment of a story

so what happens?She become hooked and hubby a wimp slave?She get so hung up in black guys she runs away from hubby?You set the story up but left it as a cliche nit a story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Crap.

Ditto.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Making a husband a white slave for black men and making a wife a sex slave to black men. I hope their kids find out. Imagine what the kids at school would say about parents like this?

allsop72allsop72almost 12 years ago
catagory

when you spin a tale LABLE it ir......num nuts

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Cuckold Husband

Well done. This should be the ultimate goal of every wife. Imagine being satisfied sexually whenever and however and having a submissive husband to use whenever and however also. It's the way things should be..

RicticRicticalmost 12 years ago
One Question.

Who was the father of the kids? It couldnt have been Mike. He didnt have a pair of balls.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
typical

racist crap

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Needs work

Formulaic, with significant grammar and spelling issues. But, keep trying.

As to those bitching about the personality defects of the husband and wife, they're figments of the author's imagination. Get help, people.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Another dumb white kunt

Once used by a bunny then she knows she is useless as a woman she is damaged goods the skankey sluts that hang out in bunny bars. They are used for a year then when the diseased kunt smells so bad you need a gas mask to be tn the same room she comes crying about how much a mistake etc. See damaged goods and lye douche.priceless ............

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
The same stupid ass..

BS story recycled over and over again and put in the wrong catagory over and over again. I stopped reading as soon as I learned what the, so called, fantasy was.

Why not just put a red light on your porch and charge to fuck your wife.

I am so sick of this tripe!!!!

bigguy323bigguy323almost 12 years ago
wrong area. should be in interracial and / or fetish.

x

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
rubbish

written by a non-evolved cunt and a pussy sozzled brain.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
you really

should try to find out why you have these racist fantasies and why the husband in these stories always come so short that the woman does not appreciate him at all and has no respect towards him.

I mean this for your personal future. you can be devoted to your husband and kids but if every erotic thought turns around pure filth, sooner or later you kill your relationships and more likely not only the one with your husband.

theaquarianpentheaquarianpenalmost 12 years ago
Just another negros fantasy

You can dream but it will never happen.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
the next part

so lets have the next part to the story?. the only thing missine was her getting her pussy filled full with black jizz. think they should have teid the husband to a chair ao watch it all and then took her with them for the rest of the weekend returning her with her pussy & nips ringed and afew DVD of her time. but had the husband done by afew black ladys and it getting taped too. yummmy. that what I would love. Doing the black studs as my mate looks on & having him done by 2 black girls

So keep it going and soon

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 12 years ago
pretty much

cookie cutter!

Next time, have one of the Bulls demand she estimate square roots of two-digit numbers (not exact squares, of course) to earn another five strokes! (has never been done before!) ((Or something novel))

Thank you for NOT having Bulls heap abuse on Hubby!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Just what the closet cucks want

If they wanted more interesting stories they would not have driven HDK, ohio, and many other good writers into retirement to make room for formulaic and cliched stories like this. Would love to piss on the head of every closet cuck squatting in this category lately.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Wrong category

Definitely should have been in interracial. Not at all original and doesn't really have a foundation in reality.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Excellent

Let the adventures begin.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Read These Stories With Your Wife

By slowly and patiently letting my own wife know i am into this kind of thing, she gradually has opened up and now will go along with it for "my" benefit.

It's been a long , patient, and rewarding journey.

She strongly puts out that it is only for me, and she is a bit dismayed by it all.

So far i haven't bought up that the 3 horniest days SHE has ever had have been days after she indulged me in this.

But it's coming - I encourage all hubbies to let their wives know that this kind of thing floats their boat.

Soon enough you will be hearing more about the various opportunities wives get every day (and especially on 'girl's nites out' ) , and once you let her know it's 'okay' you will even hear a bit more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
right section?

Why wasn't this story posted in interracial section?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
happens more than anyone knows

Very similar to what happened with my wife although my wife had wanted to be with a black man even before we met. Once she knew I was "on board " with her desire she turned into a slut for BBC

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
one of the hottest stories I have ever read.

Hope your wife keeps up the BBC great writing please continue.

Andy

Adam RightmannAdam Rightmannover 11 years ago
very hot story

I loved seeing Erica's interest in BBC grow, from watching a video to enjoying the real thing. An awesome fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
If You Think Black Cock is Not Appealing to Women - You aren't paying attention!

Yes - it is formulaic!

You meet a woman who is attractive to you - find out she is hot enough to fuck you on your first date - during your pillowtalk let her know you love how hot she is and that the thought of other men fucking her turns you on.

Once she knows her guy is okay with it it won't be long before she will be naked with her knees widespread and in the air as she reaches down to feed another man's cock home.

She may start with men of her own race but nature will soon takes its course and any man who knows women at all will soon recognize and enjoy her hunger for strange cock.

Simple stuff - even a moron should have enough sense to understand it!

devilspy2001devilspy2001over 10 years ago
Another PTA Mom hooked

This wife and hubby don't know it yet, but she is now hooked on real man sized cock and cum. Hubby will no longer be enough for her, if he ever was enough for her. Her tight married pussy has been stretched and fucked deeper than any cock before. Only thing she has yet to feel is the power of a real man's cock exploding deep in her married pussy. Filling her with thick hot real man seed. She has already took control of cuckold's dream. By finding two studs and setting the whole thing up. Now, she will begin to train cuckold. Train him on his new tasks of helper. Not just cleaning, cooking, etc. But eating her pussy after she cums. Of sucking her toys for practice. His boxers will be gone to be replaced with panties of all kinds of color. Cuckold will find that often sex means him eating her pussy and ass. Nothing for him. Soon just the idea of hubby getting off by jerking his little boy meat will piss the wife off. Then his cock will be locked in chastity and she will control when and where cuckold gets to cum. All because she is hooked on real man cock and seed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Another nigger story

By a nigger

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Why did you read it? You could have stopped? Very enjoyable I say!

I really liked it, it may be a cliche etc..... It's not a grammar comp or spelling bee, and it's an experience for the wife, a girl doesn't marry a cock, if you are close enough to your girl and she is truly your closest friend the fear will not be part of it. She isn't going to run off with a couple of big black cocks! It's a sexual experience that would turn many women on due to the scenario and the size, so what. I'd love to give my wife that experience, and I know that nobody can be me, and I would love being there and to hear my wife in that much ecstasy. My wife has given me experiences and not for a second did she feel I was gonna run off with a girl because she could give good head etc.... The purpose of the story wasn't to create anger and fear, it's to stimulate and enjoy. Hope the people whom wrote hate and fearful responses find something that makes them feel really good. Have an awesome day!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I love this story

My husband always had a fantasy to see me get fucked by one or more black men. He eventually got me to watch interracial porn and I have to say, it really turned me on. Eventually I agreed and we found a guy to be with. I was so excited that I came just by licking that big black magnificent dick. Since then we have been with about a dozen different black men. I have a black lover who comes over at least once a week to give me a hard fucking.

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal1969almost 10 years ago
Fun story

I don't care if it's been done before or if it's Loving Wives instead of Interracial Love, it was enjoyable. Thanks!

For people that complain about slut wife/hot wife stories in the Loving Wives section, Literotica's description of the category is 'Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more.'

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Intense

I enjoyed your story. It seemed real albeit a bit over the top but that is what I liked about it. You have talent as a story teller and as a writer myself, I constantly try to gain the writer's perspective and I could certainly relate. It was only after I read it that I also read your profile and was a bit surprised to see you as female. Honestly, you touched how a cuckold man might feel and act quite well. So now I am not only impressed with the writing but the writer as well. I will read more of yours.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
My Husband Introduced Me To Black Cock

My husband always had a fantasy of watching me with a black man. After a lot of IR porn we decided to let his friend Derrick join us. Since then Derrick has been nice enough to bring over some of his friends as well. My husband seems to be more excited by it than me at times. We love it. I love big hard black cocks more than anything. Yum

TigersmanTigersmanover 9 years ago
Good story

This was a really good story. The sex scenes were done just right, not too much ohs and has but very descriptive. Every white woman needs to experience black cock at least once.

seekerazseekerazover 9 years ago
great to mix a racial stereotype and a cuckold

If this is your thing more power to you, I guess. It makes no sense to me and I suspect that from this day forward the marriage is doomed. No more mystical connection between husband and wife because it's been replaced by an itch in her crotch and a collapse of his spine.

I guess the cuck strokers will really like this. The prose is pretty wooden and the characters are like cardboard cutouts. But the writing deserves 3* while the concept does not.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I LIKED IT

This is a fantasy story. I don’t understand those criticisms. If the reader is looking for church stories or real life stories, go find it in another place. My rate is 5 to incentive you go on writing. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Black Meat for Lunch

As a 35yr old white wife i had become bored with my sex life. My Husband is on the small side when it comes to Penises and is considerably older than me which makes for bad sex and small soft erections. I am the only married one among my Girlfriends and they consider me the 'Holdout' of the group because i was at one time the only one who had never had ''Black meat' before when it came to Sex. MY Girlfriends and i are very close and they constantly sent me pictures of their Lover's cocks in hopes of persuading me to have sex with a well-hung black man. After some years of bad sex and dissatisfaction, i did buy a 10 inch black didlo that was a replica of some porn stars cock and i found out immediately how much i was missing in terms of size and pleasure, and the color of it was also a turn on as i watched it go in and out of me. I work in a doctors office and for years our supply Guy(Black) would flirt with me and always said i wanted a black lover and just didnt know it. He would always use the Mens room before leaving the office and always made sure he stopped at my office to say goodbye...and always made sure that i saw his erect cock through his snug pants running the length of his thigh. It did make me wet but i never pursued it. Until one day without rhyme or reason i asked him if he had fax paper, and he said he would go to his truck and get it. so at that moment i said i would follow him out and get it so he didnt have to come all the way back. as soon as i stepped in the delivery truck he instantly took over, he put my hand on his hard cock and began kissing me and touching my Breasts(which is my weakness!). before i knew it his pants were down and i saw his gorgeous cock for the first time! it felt wonderful in my hand, and it was so long and thick(and heavy!) I didnt resist is let his Head slide into my mouth as my lipswrapped around the rim. I coudnt really suck him so i stroked him and sucked on the head until he was rock hard. He laid me down on some boxes and pulld my dress up and pulled my panties to the side and started putting that enormous head in my Pussy when all of the sudden i hear someone calling my name!! i had forgotten that my Husband was meeting me for Lunch! my Lover heard him as well and asked 'what should i do'?...I was so wet and Horny that i told him to Fuck Me! My Pussy Lips swallowed the Head of his cock and i felt my Pussy stretch as his Shaft went deeper inside me. He actually made me Cum all over his cock just putting it in! I tried to keep my moaning down as my Husbands voice grew louder and closer. He Fucked me deeper and faster and i began to squirt from that black cock! He laid on top of me and subdued me as i took his shiny cock all the way down to his balls! After what seemed like 10 orgasms i could feel his balls tighten up and i knew he was going to Cum! I certainly didnt want his load on my dress so i grabbed his tight ass cheeks and pulled him in as deep as possble as he shot a hot Load of Cum inside my Pussy! I quickly gathered myself and headed back into the Office where my Husband was waiting and i could feel his cum leaking into my Panties. I told my husband i went to the supply room and that i had forgotten about our Lunch date. I said i was sorry but i had just eaten and i was Very,Very Full! He went home and i went back to work with a smile on my face and a Dripping Pussy!!

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Ir

Whore, cuck, ir, subhuman triple threat.

fishgetterfishgetterover 4 years ago
USA?

Now I know you are not from the USA. There is no way you would use the term" I lied on the bed". It literally means : I 'falsed' (?) on the bed. The use of wrong tenses are quite prevalent, throughout. You need a GOOD editor, and a few class years, in English. Otherwise, it's a good story. * I lay back on the bed, would be correct. I reclined on the bed is also correct. ;)

26thNC26thNCabout 1 year ago

White trash whore gets her Jamal.

OlFrog14xOlFrog14xabout 1 year ago

Despite the Marquis de Sade's advice about 30 days of celibacy allowing one to discern their true desire,

I would regard a month without sex at this age as grounds for divorce. The only reason for him to go to Vegas is for evidence of infidelity for negotiatons with her family and the court.

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