All Comments on 'Eric's Revenge Ch. 03'

But I'm left kinda wondering what the hell is going on. Truthfully you have stretched my imagination past breaking with this. Nobody knows what an archangel is so how did eric recognise that ?

Pure bullshit

Yeah the story was good up until "she's an archangel" thing, that's just weird and stories like that never make sense, should've kept it human.

are a legitimate sob-genre in both the non-human & sci-fi/fantasy categories. That's probably where it should be posted since this is the 3rd chapter & still no non-con.

Re: Eric's knowledge, his minions may have enlightened him.

I'm enjoying it so far & see a great deal of potential but please make your chapters longer. Delaying a post is better than these little teasers. So frustrating for your readers.

P.U.

Next chapter please love these story

Please write more chapters. Can hardly wait to find out what happens next!

Hope to see another chapter soon. Thanks.

Damn. This is good.