All Comments on 'Erik Nolan Ch. 01'

by PerilEyes

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

hope next chapter will be soon...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
so....

you leave us hanging? this is promising.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Looks good, but is this going to be incest or a son cuckold story? More physical descriptions of the mom also would have been great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
nice

I hope it will be a cuckold-son story?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great!

Great Start!! Go On!!!

ramonbrookramonbrookalmost 9 years ago
Wow ....

What a great start and build up of a story! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

doorknob22doorknob22over 8 years ago
Loving it so far.

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I FULLY AGREE WITH DOORKNOB22 01/06/16: I ALSO LOVE THIS INTRO CHAPTER, GAVE IT A 5- (4.6/5 = 92%)

Amie needs a virile man in her life, ideally on a part-time-casual basis. If he happens to be her son's roommate, so be it. That's life.

I like PerilEyes' portrayal of Amy.

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