All Comments on 'Erin Insists Her Show Must Go On!'

by LuckyDave1066

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des911des9114 months ago

Nice one. The last line is delicious. Thank you

LenardSpencerLenardSpencer4 months ago

Excellent. Well structured and presented. Nice way of writing about the anxiety that actors have and the willingness some have of "going that extra mile". LOL. Great twist at the end when she finds out her parents had been in the audience and saw their little darling girl in all her glory! Loved it. Cheers.

Campus77Campus774 months ago

A good preamble to another chapter I hope. Got to know if Erin gets to do the rest of the run. It's almost like Hair in the nudity, but that was decades ago and times have changed. Her parents and Jeff are going to get a surprise I hope.

photokenphotoken4 months ago

Great story Thank you

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Completely delightful. And the ending of what I hope is merely the first chapter, bam! I understand the term “bam” to be a technical term of some sort meaning “You got me good!”

zooliciouszoolicious4 months ago

Another masterpiece. As usual.

cdh02cdh022 months ago

Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for writing it. I'm pretty sure Erin gets to perform on the remaining nights once Hannah discovers she would have to be completely nude to regain the role.

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