All Comments on 'Error Correction Ch. 04'

Just another disgusting, out of order chapter from this less than epic piece of shit.

This is my last comment on this pathetic idiot wimp husband and his mental deficancies.

Amen 26thNC! The story being screwed up with out of order chapters was just nails in the coffin lid! It was already dead with the subject matter and plot line! - TANSTAAFL

The idiots are not dying out. Neither in reality nor in fantasy. This author and his story prove it!

2*

'She had big brown eyes. Becky's eyes. Her chubby face was the same shape as Becky's. The nose was on its way to becoming her mother's nose. Amelia was a mocha-skinned tiny version of my wife.' So much for any reconciliation with, "She's adopted," to preserve a shred of MC's manhood (that's assuming he ever had a shred to begin with).

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I'm better understanding MC, who's like a lot of 'smart' people in that he's got holes in his character large enough to zip a medium-sized asteroid through. What still confuses me is why Becky refused to use birth control. Where is her disconnect? These characters are certifiable. Sad for Amelia.

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One thing about it, OP, you can write! 4/5.

How much more hurt is this poor psychologist wannabe gonna put himself through? also if his marriage went as bass ackwards as this tale it's no wonder his wife gets knocked up by another person, then falls for a rug muncher. what about their kid allowing/promoting her mothers crazy behavior? echhh! LP

Looks like the fuckwits have decided they didn't like your story. A wife getting knocked up by someone else probably hits a little to close to home for them.

That said I didn't really care for your story either but that's because of my agenda and this story is the biggest boner killer I've ever read. Well written but not what I'm here for.

Great potential. Almost no actual. Husband is some weird prop, a self denigrating weak minded poltroon. His wife had a mental/sexual dysfunction, then a complete failure of character and commitment. And he blames himself. No wonder the wife finds more testosterone and sexual fulfillment in Cynthia. The succeeding chapter where this eunuch becomes some kind of stud is complete bullshit.

Not even a nice try, but a complete failure of normal human behavior. Ridiculous. Some mistakes can't be fixed.

Good story. I don’t like how the wife and his kids did him in behind his back moving on . Whatever the case his wife was older to have kids and he was snipped. If she loved him they could’ve abort very early s as I’d tried to fix there broken marriage. Instead she goes to daughter and moves on with a woman and no one tells this poor bastard. He should send a letter to his girls and wife that he was leaving to end it all so they can live happily ever after. Move money how he needs , sell house and leave it to wife and kids than disappear having them think he killed himself. Evil revenge but they deserve to suffer also

This is dumb and has been getting dumber. Cardinal Rule: Don't bother with LW with a score less than four.

This part of the story reminds me of Ice Cream, per say "Rocky Road". I can almost see a three way relationship starting.

Thanks for writing.

Obviously this story has been written by a bitter, man hating lesbian

I'm dying here...with laughter (NOT happy laughter). This guy is pathetic; let's inflict even more pain on him. There is no depth to which he won't sink. Honestly if you want a story that is nothing more than sheer humiliation and destruction of a cuckold husband, this one really ranks right up there. 1* for whether or not like the story (I don't) but I may come back and give it a 5 just as a masterpiece of complete degradation for a guy who encourages his wife to fuck other men. More, more he's not sunk low enough yet, LMAO

You couldn’t have made Mike any more wimpy, could you?

Pathetic story.

Scores 1/5 deservedly

I wonder if Mike ever read about masochism in his Harvard studies?

this mc (can't call that shit a man) is beyond pathetic

Does this get any more pathetic....

Given everything the protagonist does or doesn't do (as per the authors direction) to what hell does "Because I am a man, I imagined her naked". The dude can't even stand up to his own failures as they are being demonstrated to him by A) ben, B) andre, and C) Cynthia. The authors seems to think he can make the man think like a horny goat but then live like a enuch.

This is just awful. He had a wife for 20+ years, that has acted like a cadaver in bed and then she has sex with two other men and enjoys it so much more than with him, magically knows how to do a blowjob having supposedly never done it before, and also does anal sex with no problems, if the first didn't raise a red flag, the second sure as fk would raise a battalion of them. Anal sex is uncomfortable and unenjoyable for at least the first time and with zero prep the likelihood of getting shit everywhere is astronomically high (there is a reason that porn actresses fast, have an enema and use mountains of gel) ... Still no bells ringing in his head ... Then she turns out to be a lesbian, which really doesn't just happen, so she's been dishonest her whole marriage ... and still this idiot blames himself and refuses to see what's right in front of his face.

So when you said he went to Harvard, you meant the Harvard in Guatamala and when you said he minored in psychology you meant he missed all the lessons and learnt absolutely nothing of any value.

This guy's lack of general awareness and zero introspection makes me wonder if he even graduated from high school.