All Comments on 'Escape!'

That was quite long and detailed. Is it autobiographical? I'm happy with the happy ending though

Thanks for your comment. It is pure fantasy, sometimes a snippet of a dream like 'The Holiday' grows into a story. I probably do put in too much detail but I want to make it as realistic as possible. This is only my fourth story published here and two are quite long, I also have some that are part written and two that can't be published here. The first part of a two parter called 'Pixie' will be submitted soon.

That was an awesome story...went from a good rub one out to a story i just couldnt stop reading...well done sir.

Loved it. Thank you.

Nice story. Glad it had happy ending.

But "Akiko" is a Japanese name not Thai. Or Akiko should have been Japanese instead of Thai.

nice story, it wasn't that far off from actually happening which make the best stories.

It was really nice to have such a detailed and happy ending story. You had me worried for awhile that “Di*k”, would show back up. Great story from start to finish and I’m glad that “Jeff” actually showed them what a loving relationship looked like. The sexual part was just enough to make this a well rounded story. Please keep writing other stories. Ty for this one and great job!