by NotWise
What a fun story! Over the top adventure, amazing characters, and heros worth rooting for. The sex was integrated perfectly and enhanced the story. This was a ton of fun and very hot. Thanks for sharing.
Zany from beginning to end. It sounded like an Indiana Jones movie script - it just needed a bullwhip or two. I thought about the sign for a moment - missing C tilted L that just left '..ass of 2023' hanging on that banner. Nice touch if that was intended to be the impression left in the readers' minds. 5* adventure.
Absolutely, hysterically, outrageous. Couldn't have produced a better read. You definitely owe your muse a shot of rye or two. Bravo Zulu . . . .
Definitely a fun read!
Now I'm off to explore a few more of your stories.
Thank you.