by Estcher
Ah, next the two best friends are in St. Thomas with visits to Charlotte Amalie, The Preserve at Botany Bay, Magen's Bay, to Red Hook a tour of paradise and another woman's body.
Ok, awesome work as usual, but that double cliffhanger? Mean, just plain mean! I respect that about you, you keep the story alive.
This is an awesome story with so much richness and possibilities!!
It's only the second chapter and I love this already.
Please please keep it going.
Well I hope you are working on chapters 3 and 4? Very intriguing work!!!
I've only just come across your stories and I'm loving them. You write very well, with a great flow and characters and sexy scenes that i really enjoy, thanks for writing and sharing it
I am really enjoying this story. Your character development is first rate, your scene descriptions are awesome and the story line is great! I am kooking forwad to more.
Old JR
1. 50 years old, don't train, smoke and drink all the time and look good?
2. again 50 years old and got no friends
3. sitting and fucking outside at "his fort" and no one hears?
The meaning of twoface No demanding he is a cheater and so one. No ranting to get even,to clean him at the court. Because he is male?
Dont get me wrong your story is very very good but write a story like this with a female as main character and you have 100 who hate the girl!
You slipped a Rush reference into your story. Love it! - on to the next parts!
The warning about anal play was kind, but I saw nothing that I didn't enjoy reading apart from her worst client.
Wonderful story. These two are headed to a turning point where the discover that they love each other and then some decisions will have to be made, will he stay with Nancy, will she continue to be an escort. The story is really getting interesting. Well done 5 stars
probably some of the best writing coming out right now on here, well done
Love the people. Love how much they care for each other. Really like the sex and such a good story. The best I've read. Thanks.
Did not write a comment for part one. Wanted to wait until I read part 2, or more. Well, HOLY MACKEREL! I love the story. It is not just sex, but a growing love story. Keeps me wanting more. Soooo-- on to part 3 now. Thank you.
a superb story, the characters appear real and the dialogue flows naturally - thank you!
Another excellent story. I'm beginning to like Jennifer very much. I keep wondering if she will seduce Nancy who obviously likes her. Can't wait for part 3.
I love the way you draw us into the story. These developing feelings are gonna cause trouble for Jennifer/rachel