All Comments on 'Eternal Acquiescence'

a million times, yes. Wonderfully told. you wove a story of my heart...I want to see where Jade and Liz go after this... more please!

I wonderful story that shows that love is love, regardless of trappings. Beautiful to the last word. Congrats!

You just had to do it, didn't you. You damn well made me cry! Even though this genre is not my style as you well know, your words drew me in, enthralled me, aroused me, but most importantly of all, moved me to the depths of my heart.

A true and lasting depiction of love. A wonderful story, beautifully and masterfully written. Thank you. Mat xxx

Like Mat said -- not my genre -- but your writing is absolutely gorgeous & the depth of feeling behind your words is nothing short of phenomenal. Well done, Lucky!

~ Imp

as its already been said. Beautiful story. Thank you xxx

"A love that had always been and would forever be."

Beautiful sweetie, absolutely beautiful. The balance of emotions, love, need, fear, want....they all come together for a wonderful story.

(And I'm not going to bother to say that it's not my genre, you know me too well :p)

Full of raw hot sex accentuated by Lucky's ability to relay the feelings of love the characters share. Hot and sweet. A great combination.

You are such a wonderful writer, Lucky ~ as always your stories leave a happy feeling in my heart.

~Honey

Sumptuously descriptive, tender and intense.

SN

You have written a story I would have thought impossible before I read Eternal Acquiescence. Thank you so much for this unique tale. Bravo!

...is in the details. Little pieces that strike true, and thereby make the whole story more immersive. We feel like we are hiding in the stairwell or riding in the bed of the truck because of them. The tattoo, of course. Other things. Because of the feeling of being in their world, the love between them becomes a physical thing for us, the readers. Thank you for letting me visit that world.

I love long stories like this one where the characters personalities are spooled out; I feel like I know Jade and Liz now.

Incredible story.

This is the most intense piece of erotic prose I have ever read. the right kind of submissive reads this and knows he must post his ache, must express what the words did to him.

Well written, with rich evocative language.

Both characters are well drawn, and the love and lust they feel for each other is so nicely described.

Well done!

and well written. U have got a gem of a story there. GOOD JOB !

This was masterful (no pun intended). As the title says....5 is not a high enough rating.

I've rated stories as a 5 before but this ranks even higher!

I completely agree! I wish I could've given this a much higher rating. Your works deserve more than 5 stars and make every story I've ever given 5 stars seem horrible and unworthy.

Thank you for the insight into this world. It is not me but your story has given me a greater understanding of it. Incredible expressive writing.