All Comments on 'Evan and Evelyn'

Great story! Hurry with more!

Plot is good but you need an editor.

I think you should tell more about the twins, give them some personality and make them seem real life. Thanks for the post.

strange he would hang around her and want her when he knows she doesn't want him and especially after she gave her virginty to her boy friend just a little to unrealistic should have been in the fantacy area also please use a good editor from now on never submit a story without one

I loved this story. Please continue it soon.

I like the idea. Its to compacted. No detail, no building up.

of crap

Too fast...she gave up too fast. It lost it's tension. Sad

shit

An OK sibling sex story...

3 stars