All Comments on 'Evan's Artifact'

I was surprised at the low score... at least thus far. This is a tale that's obviously going to build and I enjoyed the foundation. Curious as to where you are going to go with it...

Looking forward to more...

Why are archaeologists associated with an asteroid (or more correctly "meteor") impact site? Archaeologists do not study meteors, nor do they study aliens or alien technology.

I think this story had many good parts to it, however I also found it very confusing. Who is Nessa? The story seemed to switch from Evans view to Lee's view suddenly with no warning, to the point I was still reading it as Evans POV until Lee's breasts were made larger. How is she in a room she knew like the back of her hand? What was with the people along the walls? As I said, many confusing parts that need fleshing out.

Good story, just needs more detail to help with the strangeness.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

All those needles?

With my needle phobia, i;d die like a shrew in you hand...

Hi. I really like your story. Are you going to add to it? Thanks.