All Comments on 'Eva's Choice'

by B_Couric

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motordaddymotordaddyabout 9 years ago
A VERY INTERESTING TALE

TELL US MORE OF THE ADVENTURES OF THE THREE OF THEM

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsabout 9 years ago
Interesting indeed!

Bring on the trio!

indysubmaleindysubmaleabout 9 years ago
masterpiece

This was one of the most erotic and well written stories that I have ever read. I certainly hope that you will continue to share more of their adventures.

SoleBrotherJeffSoleBrotherJeffabout 9 years ago
LOVED IT !!!

Wonderful story.

I love stories like this.

Literotica needs to add a new category: 'The Tease.'

Or maybe: 'Cuckold Lite.'

I think I prefer the 'Tease' idea.

Here all parties are equals. No domination, no submission; all parties all in!!

crickettecricketteabout 9 years ago
Well Done

Great job describing all the action.

OOAAOOAAabout 8 years ago
GREAT story!!!

Congrats! ;)

bwiley60bwiley60over 5 years ago
Well Written!

The anticipation of her actions were drawn out enough to keep you wondering. Her husbands needed approval, until the end, added to the story.

This could easily be the beginning of another story or two.

The end where she told him to not use a condom was a turning point. Now whether it was good or bad can only be told in Chapter 2!.............

DexMandrakeDexMandrakealmost 2 years ago

I love dialogue-based stories...and you are stellar at the artform!

lc69hunterlc69hunteralmost 2 years ago

Could have been a really good story, but you started going off the rails near the end.

lc69hunterlc69hunteralmost 2 years ago

I loved the story, but...

After decades in the lifestyle, and a de-facto marriage counselor for alternative relationships, this marriage will come to a sad end. Why?

No matter the relationship, whether it be traditional, open, swinging, sharing or cuckold, one offs can be survived, and in many cases can enhance the relationship, both in and out of the bedroom.

However, in the case of an affair, or a boyfriend or girlfriend, feelings and emotions start happening, taking away from the bond between husband and wife. Eventually the wife will start seeing her husband as a lesser man (whether true or not, which is a totally different conversation), and will eventually choose the lover over the husband.

My second wife and I wrote our own vows (non exclusive, open relationship) the weekend we got engaged. Almost anything was allowed, except for affairs, or boyfriends or girlfriends. In fact, we deliberately tried to avoid hooking up with the same person twice, because we knew the potential danger.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Your writing is unusually engaging. I personally think if her story was intended to seduce her, otherwise unwilling, husband into letting her play just once it would have been exponentially more popular. Without an antagonist, it feels more like someone just recounting a long fantasy. Regardless, its a 5 Star story for the tags you used. Thanks for sharing

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