All Comments on 'Eve & Lucy Ch. 03: Off set'

I'm hooked! Your characters are well craved and in depth. The storylines are holding their own, and coming together as well, flowing nicely. To top it of, It's interesting, I'm still learning, reflecting on things trough this story. So, like last week, I will be checking Literotica regularly to see if you have posted Eve and Lucy: chapter 4 :)

Absolutely love this chapter, every moment had me primed for a disastrous meet up between Lucy and Carrie so I was on the edge of my seat the whole time but I’m glad it ended up not going that way.

similar to Carrie I scratch at my hands when I am stressed.

This is among the best stories that I've read. I too was filled with trepidation that Lucy and Carrie would meet at karaoke. I mistrust Lucy as a romantic partner. When it comes to the crunch she's going to choose her career goals first and foremost.

So complicated and real -- the way life actually is. I'm loving your writing.

absolutely love this story but i really hate how amanda says “like” in every single sentence. it’s really distracting from the story and doesn’t even seem like it even fits her character. was considering not reading the rest because of that alone but it’s such a good story.

I am absolutely loving this series!

Again beautifully written, complex, loving, tender and very thoughtfully written. Super love story with twists and turns, Carrie and Amanda are meant to be together but will they be.?

This took my breath away, the emotions in this chapter…good job