All Comments on 'Eve ... The Maid's Story.'

by izzyhug

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redlion75redlion75almost 11 years ago

so she runs away from a home where being a slut is what her mother was just to turn into one herself? please tell me that you actually planned out the story and forgot that part at the beginning.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Great story, loved how you described the way he played with her mind. I also liked the description of the trainees, all dressed in the same uniform.

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