All Comments on 'Evening with the Girls'

I like your style...love the tease of Erica. I hope and I have a feeling it will go where she joins in the fun.

I hope we hear more soon. Am wet here.

Will we see more of your work? I hope so.

It stunk. Not well written at all. It reminded me of something written by a man posing as a woman writer. Sorry for the harsh comments, but I'm being honest. I suggest you read the article by Collen Thomas about How to write Lesbian Erotica.

Notice I'm not leaving a cowardly anonymous comment. I enjoyed reading it and it seemed hot and realistic to me. Then again, I'm not a lesbian, hehehe. Keep writing!

WOW! This story got me sooo wet! Please post more!!!!

Id like to see what happens when y'all get together again, with Erica doing more than just watching...