All Comments on '"Every Cock in the Club"'

This was a surprisingly good read, considering that gang banks are just the same thing, over and over again. I hope you keep writing.

Perhaps in the next story, the boyfriend could be aware of what's happening, but unable or unwilling to stop it. In my own stories, there's got to be some humiliation of the cheated-upon husband or boyfriend. I'm double-hard if their sexual humiliation is witnessed by others - spouse, family, friends, coworkers.

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I am thinking Chelsea is pretty weak and won't be able to keep the secret. Jeff knows something is wrong so she confesses that she was raped, but before she can explain the details and numbers, he completely loses his shit and goes back to the club thinking he's going to beat the crap out of Xavier. Chelsea follows Jeff (of course, because she's not too bright) to stop him. So they're both captured and Marcus makes good on his promise of turning Chelsea into the club's permanent fucktoy -- this time while Jeff is forced to watch. And maybe also forced to participate, though I'm not sure if he'd just be forced to fuck Chelsea after she has cum pouring out of her holes or if maybe some of the club guys might have their ways with Jeff, too. Maybe both. :)

I think Jeff deserves some of the action too. Taking some I mean

Very hot, thanks!

Good story.

I agree with some others that Jeff could have stumbled in or found out about it somehow.

This is a great story but even though the thought turned me on, if any of this happened to somebody I would like all those 40 men, cause rape is sick.

Anyways thanks again for the story.

If I was in that club, no one would have done that...

Jeff finds out what happened and breaks up with Chelsea because she refuses to do anything about it. She spends a couple of weeks boyfriend hunting and just can't seem to find a guy who can do it for her. Finally, she goes back to the club, insisting that this time, they use the much more sanitary back room.

Just a thought ...

Best sex story I have ever read!!! Thank you!!!!

"Condom," she managed breathlessly. She wasn't on birth control. Jeff always used a condom. That many guys, be hard to tell who's the expecting father now. Better get an abortion ready quick without Jeff knowing.

A little more description on the cocks that relentlessly pounded her poor cunt would've been nice. Anyway well written.

Nobody wants their cervix hit. That's painful.

Nobody wants their cervix hit? What planet are you on? That's when you know it was great, when the next day, every single step, every time you sit down or stand up, is an aching reminder of everywhere he's been

I enjoyed how they used her in a club would have been better if she wasn't drunk and her BF was sober and had to watch her take all that cock i wouldn't mind being her BF

Superb I was spiked at a pub then taken by my partner to a sex cinema. I have no idea how many had me,M went home and left me he collected me 5 hours later apparently. I woke fully the next day both holes were raw and my jaw ached Oh for lockdown to be over as been told it will happen again so I can emphasise with her. Wish I could remember tho

Jealousy is a sign that he really loves you.

And every man used to (or still) have their pride.

He has every right to being possessive if in fact you are "too close" with someone man.

I skimmed all the paragraph because I still love my heart.

Well, too bad that she was not taken to a brothel for awhile. After a few days, they finally let her go back to her boyfriend. Would have liked a little more detail on how she was assaulted as we got that she had lost count around 22, then passed out, and then came awake awhile later. Would have liked to know what happened with her after the rapes. Did she go back for more? Did she tell her boyfriend some lies that he passed out and nothing happened? Did the bartender blackmail her? Good short intense erotic story.

i always find it bemusing when they have to drug and/or rape a woman to have sex with her, then turn around and call here a whore or slut. Especially virgins... If she were. you probably wouldn't have to rape her... And if she is, and you still have to rape her to get some. then how fking pathetic are you?

Although i enjoy fictional NC/CNC the notion that a grown ass man has to drug a girl just to get some is hilarious to me, like whenever i hear of that happening, apart from feeling bad for the poor girl i just want to laugh at the pathetic excuse of a “man” that had to resort to that kind of thing

Good job and imagination. A little more description would go a long way.

No one in the story is worth anything. Chelsea is a total slot Jeff is a moron the patrons of the bar are punks who can only get a woman if they rape her. Six story unless you just wanted a wank story. I guess it does that.

One of my favourite stories. You should definitely write more

Too insidious to be erotic. I love a good Reluctance story but they aren’t easy to find.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)

Not much eroticism to this story. Just "get her drunk and line up" while everybody takes turn . . . .

Only ever be the girl who just almost died in my house

Half-naked, looking through your telephone

Run you a bath and try hard not to freak out

So free and too easy

Givin' it away, givin' it away

It's not cheap but here I am

Givin' it away, givin' it away, givin' it away

Don't be my, don't be my

Don't be my last strange encounter

The moment you came to, I swore I would change

Though neither one of us would leave unscathed

At least we'll both go on livin'

hot story most women are like this and only good for being holes

Years ago I had a hot Italian chick I was having an affair with. She was really hot. I loved her brown nipples instead of my wife's pink ones and her pussy was definitely tighter then my wife. Her pussy lips would drag tightly around my cock every time I pulled out of her before I shoved it back in. Another bonus is she loved to suck cock and was great at it.

Anyway I was going on a camping/fishing trip for five days with four guys. Not sure how it started but I started talking about her coming with us and being our tent slut. I talked about this while I was with her and she came four times in quick succession as I fucked her like a dog. After I shot my load in her she pushed me on my back and took my sloppy cock into her mouth while I told her how we were going to take turns filling all her holes. I was young and it didn't take to long before I filled her mouth with jizz. One of the great things about a bj with this girl is after you filled her mouth she would keep your cock in her mouth for about 3 minutes softly sucking and using her tounge to soothe your dick

Great story. What a shame you never wrote anymore

Not bad, but it was a bit too cruel to the girl for me. Also, would have been better if the boyfriend had walked into the bathroom while it was going on. There was no pay off there for his idiocy.

If that had been my husband, he would have joined them all in fucking me

Loved it

Anna

Not bad, but it was a bit too kind to the girl for me. Also, would have been better if they pissed and shit on her.

Wow, what a story, hope you write another.