by Stephen_Gray
Well written - a beautiful Valentine's Day story. I hope you write a follow-up story of Michael and Asami.
This is one of the best stories I have read here. You brought us in
with lucid descriptions, hazily veiled recollections, and set a wonderful
tone for your nicely short encounter.
You had me until you slagged off Dan Andrews. A politician who actually stopped the spread of the disease and did the hard things so Australia wouldn't end up like England or the USA. Next time create a fake politician.
Loved the short sharp nature of this story. Well done. 5 stars.
No idea about Malbourne politics other than lockdowns have been hard. One problem the UK has faced is its reliance on imports hence not possible to close things down as quickly as other countries IMO.
Well done story that flowed and didn’t leave me having to reread parts to get through bad grammar or clumsy writing.
This is a wonderful love story with excellent characters. It really needs to be continued. Five stars.